Spent quite a bit of time narrative time in New York, which I hadn't really planned, but having filled it full o' pirates n freebooters and raiders and looters, it was kinda hard to get my characters out. Took a whole chapter just to get out of the building they were in.
Now I have to get them about fifty blocks up town, though a small war, and into a den of villains.
I was hoping that I could so in about two chapts, but it might blow out a bit. (The Transition scene at the start of WoC, for instance was originally supposed to run about three thousand words. It topped out at forty-seven thousand.)
Anyway, this is what I'll be pondering while I wrangle kids n visitors today.
How to get my guys through a post-Wave New York being fought over by baddies and the Cav.
I'm a big fan of bringing back the Cav.