Thanks to everyone who’s been noodling around the beta of Paris. It’s shaping up nicely. I’ll leave it in there for another week or so and then flick it to Deonie for the blow torch treatment.
I had an email from Dirk de Jager when he’d finished his first read thru; a suggestion that a map would nice. Which it would. I’ll see what I can do about that. If anyone knows of any copyright free map generating magic sites on the interwebs, please let me know.
I’ll have to go read Final Impact again to remind myself of how all the chips fell in the end.
Two other suggestions from Dirk:
Build an order of battle for WW 3.1: what are the forces and what are they composed of, where are they and who's commanding them.
Compose a battleplan for the invasion: something like this would be a starter I think https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seven_Days_to_the_River_Rhine
These are two excellent suggestions I’m willing to throw to open discussion here.
I’ll have some more as I closer to starting work on the manuscript proper.