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Back to the Cruel Stars

Posted October 25, 2017 by John Birmingham

I spent most of today reading the draft chapters of The Cruel Stars on Dropbox Paper. It had been so long since I'd been able to do any concentrated work on it that I thought I'd better familiarise myself with the story and characters again. I'm glad I did. I really like this story and hope it gets a chance to stretch its legs.

Before I went into shutdown earlier this year I did spend a couple of days just tweaking Lucinda's chapters, rewriting the scenes with a view to emphasizing the character flaws I'd built into her bio. It was just a few lines here and there, but it made a real difference. I'll have to do the same with the others.

I have so much work to catch up on.

1 Responses to ‘Back to the Cruel Stars’

HAVOCK21 is gonna tell you...

Posted October 26, 2017
Never having been a Sci Fi Fant Action bookie reader I've found this FKN BRILLIANT!. CONVERTED and loving it!

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